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@@ -7,32 +7,33 @@ Don't force yourself again and again
 You don't have to be a man
 
 
-and to this day I have no idea how the world sees me
-the weird looks are just normal to me
-I'm surprised when I realize it is not normal for others
+to this day I have no idea how the world perceives me
+the weird looks are simply normal to me
+I'm surprised when I realize that it is not normal for others
 to be looked at, to be othered
-I don't even know why people look at me like this - is it the gender, the mask, the bare feet, the nerdiness, or the piercings and tattoos?
-people say they care a lot for the first impression they make upon others
-and I just have no way to know what exact part of me is weirding them out on first glance
+I can't even tell why they look at me like this - is it the gender, the mask, the bare feet, the nerdiness, or the bad tattoos?
+people say they care a lot about the first impression they make upon others
+but how am I supposed to tell which exact part of me is weirding them out on their first glance
 I stopped caring a long time ago
 
 I argued with people about constructivism for very long
 and it's hard for me to accept when I'm wrong
-because my whole life people assumed my gender doesn't exist
+because
+my whole life people simply assumed my gender doesn't exist
 and every time I questioned their world
 it felt like I had to defend my existence
-so no surprise I fight to tooth and nail even in harmless discussions
+that's why I fight to tooth and nail even in harmless discussions
 because such a harmless thing as not understanding the world as constructed by intersubjective discoursive actions
-translated to me as not understanding me as I am
+tells me you're not taking me serious as I am
 
-I think they don't understand either what they hate about me
+I think they don't understand either what part of me bothers them
 just as I feel attacked by their basic world view
 they feel threatened by my identity, it undermines theirs
 because all the violence we do to ourselves to fit in with society
 I don't hide it, I turn my insides out
 and this revolutionary act
-threatens the hard-earned peace they made with patriarchy
-the concessions they made to normal society,
+threatens the hard-earned peace they made with patriarchy,
+the concessions they made to normal society.
 the parts of themselves which they supressed
 urge to come out as they see
 how needlessly they were sacrificed